Rough Draft # 1

The topic is interesting enough to merit inclusion in a journal.  Security
threats are always an important topic in the IT world and I agree that
internal security is overlooked as compared to external especially in small
business.  The topic was easy to read and understand, it would make sense to
a person not familiar with IT.  I think that is also one of its weaknesses.
I would assume the paper would be published in a IT trade journal so maybe
the paper should be more in depth with some solutions or examples from major

I believe this paper can be published as an article on a trade magazine but
needs to be revised and resubmitted to be a referred journal.  Most refereed
journals provide a specific solution or example of the topic and this paper
is a little broad.